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Tuesday, 2 September 2014

i heard a people shouting at me i heard me getting a growling i saw what i didn’t need to i saw a big dog looking at me i wondered if the dog will bite me that i will die i wondered if someone noticed the dog next to me as i walked in the dog barked and barked the closer i got i got more nerves
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  1. Anonymous24 June 2015 at 11:36

    This is good.Nice work.You could make it even better if you used big detailed words.I give this a 8/10.

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  2. Anonymous6 August 2015 at 10:02

    nice work amber but try to use more details and adjectives ok

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